Yozora Mikazuki

I'm no pro, but I'll try my best. The whole artwork is done very well. The only thing I noticed is that the right eye has a bit of a darker lining on the bottom of the eye. From far away you can notice it and close up u can tell. Could just be me seeing the right eyes eyelashes. One question I do have is, is the angle the scene is draw looking from ground up? If not than, the shirt maybe too low. But if it is meant to be viewed like that than please excuse my comment. But like I said, I'm Pro.. still very well done.